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Haha Stratten you deviously devious deviant you, with your dangerously devious DeviantArt account.
Anyway, time for my usual criticism thing. Your problem isn't so much the lack of pupils in the eyes (tons of artists, myself included, hardly ever draw pupils, and we sort of get away with it), but the shape and placement of the eyes. They are too close together, for one; unless you're going for a very cartoony look (which the rest of the image is too detailed for), you usually want to keep at least one eyeslength between the eyes. Also, the eyes seem too flat; more like eye stickers than actual eyes.
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GENERATION 22: The first time you see this, copy it into your sig on any forum and add 1 to the generation. Social experiment.
<i>"This picture shows me that the gray bird man is just a bully and picks on smaller birds. Just because he has no friends and takes it out on others smaller than him to look good. I can see in the parrats eyes that it does however have a understanding of the gray bird man and is upset about getting cut."</i> - Speeza on cartoon birds.
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