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The WW2 one looks good overall, but the pie (I think it's a pie?) appears to be exploding before impact. Some film grain would add to it (even though JPG blurring is already pretty close).
The animation in the Eh Guy cartoon is well done, except the avalanche at the end makes no sound and moves too slow. Also, having the falling thing at the end go into the snow a bit and leave a mark in the snow would add to the... floofyness, for lack of a better word... of the snow. On a less important note, the parachute is very stiff when it catches on the rock.
The rest are all quite good; you have a very cartoony and consistant style.
Also, the last one > everything.
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