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White Rabbit

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White Rabbit is doing well so far

Sep 3, 2005, 04:46 AM
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I don't understand why the girl turned into a snake because she doesn't like the jungle. She doesn't hate it, she meant it no harm. The story has a useful moral teaching, but the punishment is too harsh. :S The death of the girl doesn't make the world a much better place, IMO.

But the story itself is well-written, as usual. ;P