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Wow, someone's been practicing. You're on par with, if not better than, Faw now. Congradulations.
Anyway, CRITICISM TIME! The lines are fairly fluent and not overly sketchy, but it looks like the picture was drawn pretty small. This isn't a bad thing, but if you want to give your drawings a clean, defined look, it's much easier to achieve when they are bigger.
Other than that, the only things that really look wrong to me are his nostrils (at a different angle than his nose) and his feet (look too sketchy and differently shaped) Very good job overall.
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GENERATION 22: The first time you see this, copy it into your sig on any forum and add 1 to the generation. Social experiment.
<i>"This picture shows me that the gray bird man is just a bully and picks on smaller birds. Just because he has no friends and takes it out on others smaller than him to look good. I can see in the parrats eyes that it does however have a understanding of the gray bird man and is upset about getting cut."</i> - Speeza on cartoon birds.
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