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Time for me to transform into RADDYCRITIC!
Spoy is right about characters seeming out of character. Moreso, as the story progressed they all seemed to develop similar personalities. The leaders' goal is simply to kill everyone else and the servants' goal is to help their leader kill everyone else. It's difficult to distinguish who's on who's side. None of the characters have their own motives and methods, and you are introducing characters and subsequently killing them so fast that their loss has no effect. It's like how Star Trek always had characters you've never seen before who would die before the end of the episode.
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GENERATION 22: The first time you see this, copy it into your sig on any forum and add 1 to the generation. Social experiment.
<i>"This picture shows me that the gray bird man is just a bully and picks on smaller birds. Just because he has no friends and takes it out on others smaller than him to look good. I can see in the parrats eyes that it does however have a understanding of the gray bird man and is upset about getting cut."</i> - Speeza on cartoon birds.
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