I get to criticize before Rad. >D *laughs maniacally*

I'm not gonna bother with the first because it's... well... yeah. As for Jaime (YAY, we can stop calling her Faw's Love now!) I'll start with what I like. You did a good job with facial proportions. Her eyes, eyebrows and forehead all look about right, and she has pretty eyes (don't laugh). I also like her Haruko hair. Everytime I see the lady in the Tic Tac commercials her Haruko hair makes me smile, so ++hair that like. And now for meanness. D=
Her neck isn't centered. It's more towards her left shoulder (her left, our right). Her face is sort of undefined, so maybe if you brought out the indentions where her eyes are and made her have a prominent muzzle she would look more distinct and less flat. Right now she looks to have a human face with no nose and two holes for nostrils. I know that's, like, "anime," but a furry's face should look a little more animalish. I think we're seeing too much of her right ear considering the angle, and you might want to have her legs spread slightly. You like drawing that pose, but not many people stand that way (I stumble if I try, but I'm a clutz so I don't count). Now start telling me how wrong I am.
Overall, good job. I'm glad to see you working on character designs again (it seems like it's been a while). You know I want to say something about her hair rising too high... but I can't because it's your style and I'll just have to accept it. Keep it up Faw (and start drawing that comic or I'll start yelling at you, in a loving and friendly way).