Yes, your voice is annoying... :P I kinda liked the Flash, it was rather funny. I got a few tips for you, though:
- Try to not speak directly into the microphone. Try to talk 'over' it, so you won't hear the blowing sounds too much.
- Add a little background tune. It's quite boring without any music. You could use a video game tune in the living room scenes and some whacky piano tune for the 'stunts' they pulled.
- Wires and other flexible items shouldn't be in the same Motion Tween as the item connected to it (referring to the controllers). Try to make the wire 'frame-by-frame' animated, so you can adjust it when they are pulled/moved.
Otherwise, good job.
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