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Originally Posted by CrimiClown®
You should use Motion tweens, though, it's a lot more convenient and makes the picture look more professional, over average.
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I disagree entirely. Motion Tweens are abused way too much these days. They have their places, though.
Anyway, you are VERY experienced with Flash (and animation in general) for someone of your age. And I like your sense of humor. Allow me to make a few suggestions, though:
-Use the Swap or Duplicate Symbol tools. In instances like when the guy on the right turns his head and only his eyes move, you should switch the head symbol so the hair moves correctly.
-Use more sound effects. Whenever someone falls or lands on something, for instance, you need the sound. Otherwise it doesn't have as much effect.
-A bit more complicated of a trick I learned in a CartoonSmart.com tutorial: change the camera view more. A really neat way to do this is to put the whole movie inside a Graphic. Then, just enlarge the graphic and move it around (Tweens work great here) so different parts appear in the frame at different times. It's bad when the camera moves so much that it makes someone sick, but the movie is more interesting when it can closeup on a speaker every once in a while.
Great job overall, though.
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