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Originally Posted by acid
Wow, Slay, that was an incredible chapter. I could not put it down, in the sense of the metaphor. Excellent work, and great to see that this still has momentum.
Of course, the perfectionist in me could not go without pointing out that there were a few spelling errors. The only one that really stuck in my mind, though, was: "Galleons of blood had been spilled," which should be "Gallons of blood had been spilled."
Keep up the good work!
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They came by boat ;|
(And thanks guys, Cobs is up next. But you know Cobs, always busy prancing about and hitting on emo men with long, dark hair.)
I'm sorry about the many spelling errors this time. I told you I would have it done in two days which I did. I wrote everything and tried to get it up in time. I posted it so fast though that I did not do my usual run through, I hope it has not been to much of a distraction. (Oh, and I can not always word things exactly the way I want to in English. I guess I should take some more classes. I also apoligize for the many uses of the word I in this message. Thanks)
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Last edited by The SlaYeR; Aug 30, 2006 at 11:06 AM.
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