I dont think this is going to work Jwren.
First of all, your character is to powerful, second of all, your character just did something that totally messed up the storyline we have going.
Why did you not read the previous chapter in which we already killed off all of the werewolves? And what's with the game quotes? We're going for something original here.
Really, I don't think this is a good idea guys.
You should change EVERYTHING you've written thus far.
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