Unfortunately I find myself agreeing with Slay, for the same reasons he has stated. Superjwren, your character doesn't really fit in with the storyline and world that we have been creating. The characters should have definite weaknesses and realistic strengths that allow for more interaction and possibilities in the storyline. Also, we need to work with each other, expanding and continuing what another has written rather than rewriting events to suit our characters. At this point, your character seems to have little value to add to the cast, and your contribution does little to enhance the storyline.
Besides which, it was Cobra's turn next ...
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