...It's just I haven't had much negative feedback for a while...kinda hard to adjust to...Let's just say I have a problem with...myself...adjusting to certain changes...

For example, when someone last ticked me off...You don't wanna know....Remember Alantis? You're next....*evil snicker*

Okay, Okay, in all serious now, Thanks for your opinion. Please, tell me how I can improve on it, so I may safely add your character to my story without any...accidents...

This was one of my newer stories...my first ones were how Joshua ended up in The Video Dimension...not that anyone would care...well, the Video Dimension contains the Jazz Planets...which are located in the Everyone's Story post but...I suck at cooperative writing...so...Suggestions for the sequel, which we be posted here, will be accepted. Inform others if you wish. I want to enjoy my hobby of writing stories. It's the one of the only talents I can do, where people appreciate what I do...everywhere else, I am mocked...for who I am...a young, 16 year old who is hated by most of the people in his school of 600...



I haven't had an enjoyable life at school...and it's getting worse. Could ya at least suggest something to help me get better at this? Please...