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Fawriel

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Fawriel is doing well so far

Jan 9, 2007, 09:31 PM
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Originally Posted by Radium
Eh, the rhyming was a bit irregular. The "-ay" stanza was very nice but the "-eth" one didn't flow at all. I'll hold out for N0body's retaliation.
The rhyming was extremely irregular. Intendedly. It also wasn't quite to be appreciated for its lyrical beauty...
I could just as well criticize that your storytelling in your entries is a little over-the-top. =P
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