Some of us actually read posts before commenting on them.

I have to admit, I do like how this is starting out. It will be interesting to see where it goes from here.

Coolpeanutbutter, a few misspelt words:
"perands" should be "parents"
"chilling" should be "ceiling"
"sergest" should be "suggest"
"too sweet" should be "to sweat"
"though call" should be "tough call"
"conferees" should be "confused"
You've also confused "there" and "their" in a few places.