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Originally Posted by Coolpeanutbutter
2 your right jazz can't give daven his blaster but that doesn’t mean that he tells him it's in his backpack.
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Eh, the LFG 2000 is way bigger than Jazz's backpack. It would never fit. And really, if Jazz had to choose between a family heirloom and his children, he wouldn't hesitate to save his children.
And you really need to break the outline into paragraphs. It's simply not readable unless the reader wants to put forth a lot of effort. And I'm not about to blind myself trying to read all that. Just break it up; it won't take long.
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