OK, ok. Just one more minor counter-argument before I let you leave it the way it is: why the heck didn't Devan look in Jazz's backpack to begin with? Jazz was already restrained.... if I were an evil villain, the first thing I'd do is root through the hero's stuff.
And again, my main point here is not meant to be whether or not the gun will fit; the main point was that I don't see that portion of the scene as even being necessary. It's just a gun; Jazz could wake up and Devan already has it (especially considering how remarkably easy it would be to find).
And, uh... I just read the tutorial you have in Chapter 2.... why are there blasters in Jazz's backpack?...
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