well i guess that would make a good cut sence but where would i put it. i guess i could put it in the start with the rest of it. or i could make it like a little thing that you unlock then go into the extra page in the menu then watch it there. any way the story has been put on hole because people want me to write in detale so chapter 3 is on holed. chapter 1 and 2 are getting updated and are going to be higher detale. i just hope that i don't get kicked for the forum because they are going to be about 10 pages or more for each chapter. so please don't ask me for chapter3 it will come in time and the more you ask the more anoyed i will get so please don't ask for chapter3 until the updated 1 and 2 come out.