Ah the story is going so SLOW but i'm still coming up with ideas for it. i thort the the school holidays would help me write the story but it dosn't must be because i'm home that i'm not working much on it. any way the holidays are nearly over so that sould get me back up to speed on my story i have come up with a new idea but i have been thinking sould i ask people if they like it or just but it in. but i'll ask my idea is to make lori like a ditsy blond girl.