i'm not really sure what you're trying to show us with that photograph. you leave most of the space to the scenery that's bludged out to pancakes and then you have your girl on the left whos face is hardly angled in on the picture. if you're trying to show she's walking, you should get some more motion into the picture. if you're trying to show some emotion, you should play a little with the colors. if you're trying to show the girl, you should catch more of her face.