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**Coppertop** · May 31, 2007, 07:55 PM

Overall, the image seems too bright to me. If it's sunrise (or sunset, either one) the sky should be darkening. The atmosphere should be more dusky, for lack of better words. The contrast between shadows and light would be much more pronounced as well.

The character could use a little more detail - folds in the cloth, etc.

Other than that, I like it

Coppertop Moderator Joined: Mar 2001 Posts: 4,210 May 31, 2007, 07:55 PM #5
Overall, the image seems too bright to me. If it's sunrise (or sunset, either one) the sky should be darkening. The atmosphere should be more dusky, for lack of better words. The contrast between shadows and light would be much more pronounced as well. The character could use a little more detail - folds in the cloth, etc. Other than that, I like it