Personally, I liked the origional part where he reaches the safety of the village, instead of blowing the orcs up in a big mushroom cloud.
And yes, You did not describe the main charactor or his horse very much. Question marks raised when the horse talked for the first time.
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The difference between the two forums is that the war tavern is more of a community forum where people hussle up either fan fictions with generic comments or an open roleplaying, where in the art forum the original poster would be looking for critique on the work itself - such as style of writing, usage of language and so on.
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So that's why no one's commented on My story???
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