Yeah, the lines are very shaky indeed. I was trembling like heck.
Drawing lines faster works indeed, I did that for the "dress". At least with the pencil. It seemed too risky with the ink pen, given my lack of experience with it.

So... what exactly is a brushpen?
I did use two somewhat differently thick pens, but.. yeah, not THAT differently. I'll work on that.

I'll also work on making the differences in hue in the coloring less subtle so it looks better... not everyone stares as closely at pictures as I do. ^^;