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Radium

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Jul 2, 2007, 03:02 PM
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I just spent like an hour writing a five page critique of a story, so I'll make this quick:

Try to make sure both legs are the same width (same with arms), use a reference image for doing lightning, and keep your light source constant (the lighting on the character appears to be coming from the upper left, but the only light source visible in the picture is the lightning behind him).
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