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Hi all! Chapter 4 of Tales of the Psi is out, though it's slightly shorter than the other chapters. This is also the point where the narrator stops talking in the present, and focuses more on the story.
Some criticism would be much appreciated!
EDIT:The entire thing so far is being re-written, so all previous versions of the chapters are being removed.
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Last edited by ShadeJackrabbit; Sep 15, 2007 at 04:55 PM.
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