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Originally Posted by ShadeJackrabbit
Great... thanks for making me feel guilty about always asking you for help...  |
Well, Tales of the Psi is what showed me that my story critiques are longer than the stories themselves.
FreeFull, give me your story as a Microsoft Word DOC file and I'll give it back to you with the full editor treatment; red underlines, comments, strikeouts, everything.
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GENERATION 22: The first time you see this, copy it into your sig on any forum and add 1 to the generation. Social experiment.
<i>"This picture shows me that the gray bird man is just a bully and picks on smaller birds. Just because he has no friends and takes it out on others smaller than him to look good. I can see in the parrats eyes that it does however have a understanding of the gray bird man and is upset about getting cut."</i> - Speeza on cartoon birds.
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