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Faw turned out well; you've never had any problems with observational art. Well, one thing I don't like: his nose. The rest of the picture looks like you drew it based on what you saw, but with his nose you just kind of said "I'll draw an upside-down seven!". Try not to descend to the type of drawing that thinks of a nose as a rotated 7, or an eyes as a sideways (); you can do better than that.
As for Le Bum, I agree with Xobim about the eyes. The picture is made confusing by the fact that they don't even look much like eyes, though that's due to their positioning as much as their shape. I'd either move them further up, to a more eyelike place, or make them eye-shaped. It depends what aspect of them you want to emphasize to characterize the frenchman: their position or their form.
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GENERATION 22: The first time you see this, copy it into your sig on any forum and add 1 to the generation. Social experiment.
<i>"This picture shows me that the gray bird man is just a bully and picks on smaller birds. Just because he has no friends and takes it out on others smaller than him to look good. I can see in the parrats eyes that it does however have a understanding of the gray bird man and is upset about getting cut."</i> - Speeza on cartoon birds.
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