Needs more Maito Gai.


For starters, choose a shorter song, try to come up with an actual concept, then put more effort into every single scene. Try to make the speed of the action fit with the speed of the music. It doesn't match up at all here. It's possible to make a scene powerful by making powerful music play while the action seen is going very slowly, but that only works about once per video during a really dramatic scene. If the whole video is like that, it only looks disjointed.

An AMV should let the images be enhanced by the music, and the music be enhanced by the images. If the two are disjointed, both become less powerful than they would be on their own.