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Originally Posted by Dev
I'm sorry I didn't point all this out during sketchphase, but this stuff just isn't as obvious until the whole thing is done and can no longer be saved. Still a good punch, though.
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This is a suckface attitude, Dev! You're forgetting I'm a vector specialist; I just went back and fixed like half the stuff you brought up. Thanks for the pointers.
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I cannot believe you churned this out of that sketch so quickly.
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It took me hours D=. Next time remind me the floodfill tool exists for a reason; for some reason I thought my lines were disconnected enough that it'd be time beneficial to draw in the colors by hand as opposed to just closing the gaps in the lines and floodfilling them.
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Originally Posted by Dev
Obviously yeah, she's a female, but in some panels she looks more fem than in others. Inconsistency in the character model is best avoided when possible.
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I swear I cannot get her to look like the same person between two panels. I like to think I'm getting closer, though, and by the next comic she may actually be solidified.
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Aaand the backgrounds are weak but you know that. Time probably had something to do with it. No trees anywhere. Bob Ross would be appalled.
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Hah, admittedly here I was trying to stay consistent to the environment Faw made. I think the tree is in another room. I'd love to do some more complex backgrounds, but the only environments I ever draw are either ruined stone buildings or large trees, and the setting of this comic evidently doesn't really expand my horizons any.
Over on Trogside I've been having some fun trying to draw convincing tanks, though.
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Originally Posted by IconGuy
Just noticed we don't see her taking her gloves off.
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I actually forgot she had gloves until I already had most of it inked (admittedly, they are very forgettable. Faw forgot about them too). I like to think it's implied enough that she took them off while Faw was talking in panel 7.
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Last edited by Radium; Feb 16, 2009 at 10:11 AM.
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