Haha, I really love how her breasts are censored in the second picture. Awesome!

For the rest: I'm not in the state of being a relevant art critic anytime soon, but what I can say is that you've quite improved over the years. You got a nice style and I like that, your faces are especially good. I also like how the Fawriel character is so calm and carefree all the time.

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As for the vote... hm, I haven't yet decided. I like both, but I'm not yet sure which is better.