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Violet CLM

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Mar 26, 2001, 08:23 PM
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OK, this is my first story in the War Tavern so don't pelt me with rotten tomatos. Here we go:



A musical story: Chapter 1:



Alas! The rabbits are all fallen

though I think that they are just stallen'

to rise again and reclaim their world

which they had until that army Devan unfurled.

The reptilian soldiers took away

the houses of rabbits from the WT to Bombay

and when they were done the houses were burned

until the turtles were knocked out when their backs were turned.

Jazz led a front to take the guns

from the unconscious turtles who had been having fun

and then lead the rabbits to the home

of Devan, who they would blast to kingdom kome.

The rabbit fighters went for the gate

where they were told by a lizard they must wait

until the Geeky Guy had some time

to spare, in his house sublime.

They blasted a way in with the LFGs

that the turtles had had till they fell to their knees

They found Devan in sweet repose

which turtles like, as everyone knows.

He laughed and pressed a button on the wall

which caused a metal cage to fall

around the rabbits! Who were annoyed

that Devan regarded them as little more then toys.

The LFGs were taken away

from the rabbits who had thought to win that day

against the evil reptilian front

who had killed many rabbits in one hunt.

The rabbit army was led to

a dungeon! Which was filled with goo

and slime and icky stuff and mold

or at least, that's what I've been told.

They all were put in seperate cells

including Jazz, who wasn't feeling well

how could he have let them all be taken

and he had thought money he'd be raking

in! From merchandising rights

which he got after all of his fight

with Devan, the geeky turtle guy

and other enemies, by the by.

But instead they had all been taken

and meanwhile Devan was making

an audience with the head killer

who worked for the IRS, as a biller.



to be continued...





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