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Fquist_old

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Jan 21, 2001, 04:34 AM
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Dazz

Member posted September 19, 2000 04:47 PM




First chapter is done!

Chapter 1: Dazz + Ayeka Kidnapped!



On the way home from school, a blue rabbit with purple hair by the name of Daze was thinking. About school…family…and fighting. He’d wanted to fight after becoming a super saiyan at the age of 2, and a Golden Oozaru at the age of three. He also thought about his younger sister, Selphie…he’d only heard about her through his parents. He was so young when she died…



Suddenly, he heard an energy beam firing…then another one…and another…he changed into a super saiyan and ran after it, hoping to join thew fight.



He found the fight: his father, Dazz versus another rabbit he’d never seen. He ran inside and grabbed his sword (which was not allowed at school) and ran back out. A he found was his father’s scouter. He put it on, and found a message: “Daze…go to Yaditz…map…AtomAK attacking…” and the message was cut off. Daze tapped the scouter twice, and said, “Yaditz’s house!” Suddenly, a map appeared on the screen, showing the way from Daze’s house to Yaditz’s house. “NIMBUUUUUS!” Daze shouted, and his father’s flying nimbus appeared. He jumped on it, and took off for Yaditz’s house.



Knock knock. “Coming!” the door opened. “Dazz? Wait no…you have purple hair!” The strange looking creature said. He looked strange…all except the tail…just like Daze’s! “Dazz is my father, Ayeka is my mother. My name is Daze,” Daze said. “Wow…you look just like your father, with your mother’s hair! You’ve really grown! My name’s Blizzard…well, your mom and dad called me Yaditz. I’m a human, but I wished to be a saiyan,” he said. So that’s why he looks that way! He’s a full saiyan-no rabbit in him! Daze thought. “I’m here with a message-and I guess you need to train me,” Daze said, handing him the scouter.







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-Fquist

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