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Spelling: Definitely not the best or even close. Only spells about half of the words correctly, therefore 5/10
Grammar: Out of all the sentences, only one is capitalized. Sentence structure is decent, if you ignore the spelling, but the complete lack of regard for typical rules of English cannot be ignored. 2/10
Punctuation: You mean almost complete lack of. 1/10
Content: In a nutshell, a boast. Not the most original, and even then could use some refinement in the overall tone. Word choice could have been better to reflect the point of the post more correctly. Perhaps he should have thought this through first? 4/10
Effect: Not much to speak of, to be honest. The fact that he's talking about what weapons they're good at using turns me off because it makes me think they don't really know what JJ2 is about. 4/10
Final grade: F-
Notes: Could use some research into the community itself, and hell, the game. I'm not sure what cutting trees and 'hares off of faces' has to do with the game.
Seems interesting enough. Look forward to playing with/against you guys.
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Last edited by Sean; Nov 23, 2011 at 02:46 PM.
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