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Fquist_old

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Jan 21, 2001, 04:42 AM
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Dazz

Member posted September 25, 2000 05:54 PM






Umm..yeah...whatever.

Next chapter! YaY!



Chapter 3: The Attack



“Daze, this AtomAK guy, you’ll need to check him out using this scouter.



“Anyway, I disabled the maps part, so that you’ll be able to train better. You have to survive in the wild until I come get you, and then we’ll do the real training.”



Real training? So this isn’t my training? Dang, I thought. “AtomAK,” I said, tapping the button on the scouter three times.

AtomAK:

Said to be a great super saiyan, though bears no resemblance to a saiyan.

Never had a tail, nor the ability to strengthen after every battle.

He doesn’t have yellow hair either, and isn’t a super saiyan four

Because he doesn’t have fur like an oozaru.

Even though all of this is true, he still has the strength to be

A super saiyan.

“Wow!” I said.



“Daze! We need to go attack Atom! He’s destroying a city! Here’s how you perform Kamehameha…” Yaditz said, showing me the Kamehameha technique. “NIMBUS!” I called, and hopped on the flying cloud. “Let’s go, Yaditz!” I said. “You can call me Blizz-or Blizzard,” Yaditz said. We took off, headed toward a city I’d never been to before. Yaditz-umm, Blizz- wrapped a blindfold around my head so I couldn’t see, and led dad’s Nimbus.



Ka-BOOOOM! Atom had blown away another building. I ran over to attack him, drawing my sword, and suddenly I was blocked. “Huh?” I looked up, straight into a bunch of blonde hair. I backed up o get the hair out of my face, and saw a white rabbit. “What?” I thought aloud. It couldn’t be! “Hey Daze!” How’d she know my name? I’d never told her at school! I’d never seen her but from a distance! “Lindsay? You’re a warrior?”



“Ka…” ZAP! “Me….” Ka-BOOOOM! “Hame….” “You’re good! But not good enough…” “HAAA!”

Lindsay fired her blast, and knocked Atom into his ship. “Get outta here!” She shouted. The ship took off.



Lindsay fell to the ground, and her belt fell off…no…her tail! “You’re a saiyan!” I shouted. “No…I’m…a super…saiyan…” She said, and fell unconcious.



“What? Where am I?” I asked. I looked up and saw Daze-the one rabbit who I had ever liked…I mean, liked more than a friend…and I had never even talked to him. But I had made it my business to find out his name, and more about him. After he joined the football team, I’d joined cheerleading. “Lindsay, you ok?” He asked. “Yes…I’m ok,” I said. “Lindsay! You’re a super saiyan! What triggered the transformation for you?” He said. “I…was born….a super….saiyan…” I said. “Like Brolly, the legendary saiyan?” Daze’s full-saiyan friend asked. “Yeah…something…like that….” “Cool!” He said. “Hi, my name’s Blizzard, but most people call me Blizz. You wanna train with us? I can spar with you while we watch Daze take care of himself in the wild,” Daze’s friend said. “Ya mean I’m still out in the wild? I can’t spar with you two?” Daze asked. “Yeah.” “Ok, I’ll train,” I said, getting up. “You’re still not healthy! Eat this, and you’ll be able to get up,” Daze said, pushing me back down and sticking something weird in my mouth. I chewed and swallowed…It was like I was wished back to life! My body was restored! “It’s a senzu bean,” Blizz said. I jumped up, and powered up to my new maximum power.



Dazz

Member posted September 29, 2000 07:15 PM




Oh yeah! New chapter!

Chapter 4:The Wild(hard ta come up with chapters)



“Ok….umm….” I said, looking around. I pulled out my sword, and cut a small hole in the wall. I climbed inside, and cut some more area. “Ok, a new…umm…house?”



I punched towards Blizz’s head, and he dodged it, and grabbed my hand. “You’re pretty good, but not good enough, Lindsay!” He threw me down towards the ground, but I stopped just before I hit it, seeing Blizz teleport below me. “Ha! You’ve done that trick so many times, ya don’t think I’d catch on?” I said. I flew down, and at the last minute, boosted my speed so that no regular saiyan could see me, and flew behind him. Once I got behind him, I blasted one of my energy attacks. “Ha!” I said, taking off my jacket. As soon as I had it off, I felt much better, now that the weight was gone. I looked up, and saw Blizz taking off his armor. I knew if I was fast enough, I could hit him while he wasn’t looking. “KAMEHAMEHA!” I shouted, and blasted an energy beam at him, hitting him full force. I started launching energy attacks by the millions, creating a huge explosion. Suddenly, I felt something hit me in the back. It was very painful.



“Man, this is boring,” I said, looking out of my new cave. I got up, and jumped out. I started hopping over to the area with the most trees, with a half a coconut shell on my head. As soon as I got there, I started jumping from tree to tree, searching for food. I came back with tons of apples, bananas, oranges, cherries, grapefruit, and grapes (don’t those grow on vines? Heh).



“AAAAAHHHHHH!” I screamed. Blizz was flinging me around by my tail. Kame…hame…HA!!!” I thought, and fired a kamehameha at him, hitting him in the face. His hands were to busy flinging me to block the attack, and he was thrown backwards. I flew over to him, and hit him in the back, sending him into the ground. I saw him stop just before he hit, so I flew down and hit him in the head, and he went flying the rest of the way into the ground.



That night, Blizz and I were talking. “So, how much longer until Daze is done in the wilderness?” I asked. “Until he’s ready for more intense training. That’ll probably take a year. It only took Gohan about 6 months, but Piccolo can’t give as intense training as I can.” “Yeah, but Daze’s pretty strong. He’s probably as strong as I am!” I said. “Yeah right,” Blizz said, laughing.





ONE YEAR LATER

Ok, Daze, time for your next training!” Blizz said. “Wow, it’s already time?!” I said. “OK!” “follow me, then!” Blizz said. “NIMUS!” Blizz shouted, and Dad’s Nimbus came to me. I jumped on, and followed Blizz, right next to Lindsay.