Ok, a restart... I suck I know I hope you guys like this version better. Thanks for the suggestion Kaz...
*Wishes he could delete the stuff b4*
Well here goes....

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"Darkness - One dimension, One world... One Power, One Force... One is disturbed... All will perish into darkness..." - Runes of Atonya

Chapter 1

Red XIII went into the tall and gleaming War Tavern... Inside, a strong stench can be smelt of the awful toxicated beer, "Rabbit Juice" He walks over to the bar and talks to the bartender.
"Get me something strong, will ya?" Red XIII coughed.
"Sure, coming right up, one Rabbit Gin and Tonic."

Red XIII stared at the shadow at the brown door. It was a tall and standing statute and in front of him were carved the symbol DS.
"Not another Dark Soldier..." Red XIII took his place.

Battle commenced, the Dark Soldier took his place with his double bouncy guns and loaded several times. Red XIII put on his hair pin and rolled to the right showing that he wanted to go first. The DS didn't say anything, only under his hood of darkness, a evil smile appeared. Red XIII was used to this and he grinned to. The customers of the war tavern stood well back, knowing never to get into trouble with Dark Soldiers.

Red XIII started with his triple S combo as he always had. Slash, Special and Star Striker. Dazing the DS well, he ran forward and used his limit break, Sled Fang. The DS fell, but he showed no intention of losing. He went forward and used his only deadly move, Final Death. Red XIII growled softly and used the one he would use when a DS is needed to be finished, Lunatic High. His eyes glowed red, his fur went upwards and ran straight through the Final Death and defeated the DS, bloody or not.

The people hiding behind the tables came up. Red XIII had gone out of his Lunatic High and collapsed and drank down the G&T on the table. His MP felt restored but he was tired. The people went back to what they did normally and Red XIII ran out of the tavern and howled...

Derby: Wrong Content edit

Red XIII: heheh