Thats really..errr thoughtfull electropizza.

Thanks to everyone that reads the story, the mainline of this story is finished (its the first time i actually think before i start to write



so its all cool, if you like the characters Louie and Jazz at the end of the story, i will write a series of Louie and Jazz storys (i already thought about a few plots)



Tell me what you like about the characters, storyline etc. and i will keep that in,

tell me what you dont like about the characters and i will try to improve that if i can.





thank you,

Slayer



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