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The Last Patriot

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May 16, 2001, 12:56 PM
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The monster doomed up in front of them, it carried a terrible smell with him.

He raised his claw and aimed for Jazz.

Jelze: "Jazz look out, its got his mind set on you".

Jazz dodged to the left and the slow but strong monster hit Jelze instead.

Slayer ran over to Jelze and saw that his cheeck was covered in blood.

Slayer: "That was a close one, we can be glad enough he still breaths".

Jazz was the monsters centerpoint of attention, he jumped, dodged and ran to stay out of it's hands.

Slayer tried to wake Jelze up, but it was a little harder then he thought.

Slayer: "Come on man, Jazz could need our help here".

Then he heard a sound that almost made his heart stop.

The ground shook a little and he could hear heavy breathing.

Another monster appeard in front of him, even bigger then the other one.

Slayer: "Oh no, another one of those smelly apes, wake up Jelze this guy is after us". Said Slayer with a nervous voice.

He threw Jelze over his shoulder and started running.

The monster wanted to crush them with his bare foot when Jelze woke up.

Jelze: "HOLY COW". He jumped off of slayers shoulder and rolled over the ground, Slayer jumped to the other side and the monsters foot barely missed them. the monster looked at the two rabbits and let out a gurgling sound.

He reached his hand out to grab them.

Jelze and Slayer noticed and they dived for the ground causing the monsters to slap his hands togheter very hard.

The monster let out a loud cry, this track the other monsters attention.

Jazz fell to his knees and gasped for breath.

The monsters started to let out strange cries.

Slayer: "They must be communicating, this could be interesting".

Jazz: "Oh man i wish i had a videocamera with me".

Suddenly one of the monsters stamped on the ground and screamed.

Jelze: "Ok, i dont know what he's doin but i dont like it a bit".

Then it felt like their hearts stopped beating, when they looked behind them they saw five of those huge monsters.

The eyes of the other two had lit up.

Jazz: "Theyre Telepatic (sp?)".

Slayer: "You're kidding? RUN!!!!" Slayer, Jazz and Jelze started to run, hoping to find some secure place.

Jelze: "There a hill!"

They could see the shadows of the monsters legs falling over them.

Slayer: "Darn, they catched up with us".

With last breath they had, they jumped over the hill.



***



We arrived at the other side of the hill not knowing what to expect next.

We didnt know where we had end up this time, the zone was very similiar to the one we had landed on when we first came to this planet.

Only it felt like the trees and plants were alive here, it felt so much better.



Jazz, Slayer and Jelze looked around them at this beautyfull landscape.

Jelze: "This is so much better then that ice-zone we we're before".

They looked around, trees full of fruit, rivers full of fish and the birds where flying trough the beautyfull trees, paradise compared to the zones they had walked trough before.

Jelze: "Cool, this place has its own paradise".

Jazz: "Somethings not right here though, i dont trust that Natura".

Slayer: "Yeah, its all cool here, far away from her".

A strange sound came out of the bushes behind them, when they looked behind them they could see someone running away.

Jelze: "GET HIM".

Slayer: "Hey, who said you where the leader here"?

While Slayer and Jelze where discussing this Jelze crawled trough the bushes, the person in the bushes hadnt noticed him and Jelze catched him, a moment later he came out of the bushes carrying a strange creature,

light-purple skin color and his eyes closed, there was indeed life on this planet.