Nice ending, but a little bland. Lemme try...

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Suddenly, the rain stopped, the lights popped on and loud, bouncy, and suspiciously optimistic music started up. No one knew why this happened, or why there were any christmas lights in the Tavern in the first place, but people cheered up regardless.

Then the JJ3 rumor went out and a few people fought tooth and claw for the (illegal?) "DEMO" of "power" while the others impassively watched. There we must end, because the next moments could get quite gory.

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That's more like it?