'Tis much spoony.
there it is again! *runs away*
Good for an origins story, i think... kinda short, tho. Then again, you have about twelve different sections there already. So I think I'll shut up now.
btw, the last line of that chapter... it's basically screaming "CHARACTER SUBMISSIONS!"
Is this what you're trying to say?
If so, I want in!
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Last edited by Derby; Aug 4, 2002 at 09:32 AM.
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