It is pretty good, but watch the grammar. Spelling errors are forgivable, but grammar errors detract from the story.
Oh, and White Rabbit, what signature? 
Too bad I didn't have a role in this part. Do go on. (Oh, and Unhit, one can tell that you really are a great fan of Star Wars. You really do follow everything related to it. I enjoyed the movies, but that's it. Oh, and I guess you are rewriting episodes 1 and 2 to your liking, eh?)
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Proud to be an old-timer! Rarely active, but Jazz Jackrabbit will always be in my heart. 
Check out my War Tavern story, The Life of Jason Jackrabbit! [UPDATE - yeah, it died in 2002, but it was fun!]
Current Projects: Devan's Secret Weapon - yes, I still intend to release this some day. Got a lot of really great stuff done, it's going to be awesome!
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