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...I didn't read the whole thing again, but I noticed that "for to vote" was still there. That bugs me... get rid of the "for". It should just be "to vote....". Oh, and you should edit the original post and replace it with the edited version, rather than posting it later like you did.
Oh, and I claim page two.
AJ2f
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Proud to be an old-timer! Rarely active, but Jazz Jackrabbit will always be in my heart. 
Check out my War Tavern story, The Life of Jason Jackrabbit! [UPDATE - yeah, it died in 2002, but it was fun!]
Current Projects: Devan's Secret Weapon - yes, I still intend to release this some day. Got a lot of really great stuff done, it's going to be awesome!
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