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Violet CLM · Jul 7, 2002, 02:05 PM

Try not to alternate between past and present tense. It looks bad. And the grammar (not just Yoda's) is kind of bad. But other then that, it's ok. (Though I've never been a big fan of the script format)

Violet CLM JCF Éminence Grise Joined: Mar 2001 Posts: 11,090 Jul 7, 2002, 02:05 PM #42
Try not to alternate between past and present tense. It looks bad. And the grammar (not just Yoda's) is kind of bad. But other then that, it's ok. (Though I've never been a big fan of the script format) __________________