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Originally posted by Unknown Rabbit
Try not to alternate between past and present tense. It looks bad. And the grammar (not just Yoda's) is kind of bad. But other then that, it's ok. (Though I've never been a big fan of the script format)
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I'm sorry for the grammar...but while writing this, I don't think much, I want to do it fast.
AJ2F: I did not re-upload because I was too lazy to add the tags.
Nm you forgot it Wildie. At least, you found all other errors. I love you  !
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