Go me!
BTW, absolutely schwa story so far, Acid. And the "ASTERISK BOMB SWORD EXCLAMATION MARK DOLLAR SIGN NUMBER AT!!!!!" idea was prolly the fooniest one I've heard all day.
One thing tho. Carrotus is spelled like that, with an o. Just for future chapters and such.
Also, I wouldn't mind if Jack Flash aids in killing the bad dood.
Speaking of bad doods (and this might be a really stupid idea, but just bear with me on this one), why not use a villain from Redwall? I mean, Brian Jacques doesn't seem to know about JJ2 (or maybe he does, but I'm doubtful as to whether or not he knows about this community...  ), so what he doesn't know, won't hurt him, right?
Right?
Right.
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