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Sep 5, 2002, 06:29 AM
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Talking chapter 5: Terminator strikes back

“Electrik, see if you can get the computer to show a diagram of the ship’s armor,” said Jack.
“Sure thing!” said Electrik. He fiddled with a few of the switches, and then the computer showed a model of their ship. It then got shaded over with green, and then got shaded in how damaged it was. The more damaged it was, the redder it was. Electrik looked worriedly over at the engine area, where the diagram showed a very definite shade of orange. “Oh no! They’re trying to blast into our engine!”
The orange faded to red, and then snapped to black.
“WARNING!!! ARMOR COVER BREACH-“ the computer didn’t have time to finish what it was saying.
*BOOM!!!*

Somewhere in Carrotus palace…

A purple rabbit entered the room. He was wearing small glasses and a green backpack.
“Yes, Wizard Of Odds?” said Jazz.
“We lost track of them on the radar. Their ship might have been destroyed, but they might have survived.”
“We should send a search party out right away to find them!”

A little while later, Captain J. Firefox, Blaze Blackrabbit, Headcheese and Wizard of Odds set off to try to find where the ship had disappeared.
“It should be over in this direction,” said Wizard of Odds.
After a little while of searching, they saw a crashed ship. Headcheese ran up to it. She opened a hatch, poked her head in and said, “Hewwo!!!”
“Headcheese! Where did you come from?!?” said Jack.
The rest of the search party ran up to the ship.
Wizard of Odds radioed Jazz at the palace.
“We found them!”
“Good!” came the voice at the other end.
“Okay, let’s get back. They’ll be waiting for us!” said Wizard Of Odds.
“Leaving so soon, are you?”
Everyone looked up. Terminator was in his ship, and didn’t look very merciful.
“Out of ideas, eh? Well too bad,” said Terminator. He trained all of his guns on the group.
“RUN!!!” yelled Electrik.
Everyone ran just as a barrage of bullets would have pulverized them if they hadn’t. Terminator swerved his ship and began chasing them.
“Okay, I’ve got a plan!” said Acid. “We’ll split into two groups. Jack, Electrik, Fawriel and Phoenix Wing can run back and try to attack Terminator, while the rest of us try to distract him!”
Everyone decided this was a good plan. When the ship got really close, they jumped as high as they could.
Terminator heard several bumps, but he dismissed them with a shrug. Omicron didn’t. He walked over to the lift and told it to take him to the roof.
When he got there, he saw the attackers on the roof of the ship. They did not seem to notice them yet. He identified them by how much of a threat they were, and how dangerous it would be to attack them. He decided that he would attack Phoenix Wing.
200 pounds of black metal pounded into Phoenix Wing’s back, nearly knocking her of the ship. She whirled around, and saw Omicron readying for another attack. This time, she was prepared. Omicron launched forward, and Phoenix Wing did the same, and the two met in the center and began fighting. Everyone else knew that if they tried to help Phoenix Wing, it has a 50% chance of hurting her instead.
Omicron had been built to have more power than anything. One of his punches felt like 50 people punching you at the same time in the same spot. He had only been losing because he had been surprised by Phoenix Wing’s attack. Soon, however, he regained the edge in the fight. He waited for the perfect moment, and then landed one of his punches in Phoenix wing’s stomach. She flew straight into the tailfin and left a very large dent. Electrik, Fawriel and Jack Flash immediately started attacking Omicron because he was alone. Omicron knew only Electrik could do anything to him, and immediately laid him flat with a hefty blow to the head. He then turned to Fawriel. Fawriel kept his distance because he knew Omicron’s physical strength was much greater than his.
Jack meanwhile, was digging in his ammo pack for some TNT. He didn’t find any but found some electro blaster, which would work anyway. He shot at Omicron. The electricity fried Omicron’s circuits, and he shut himself down to prevent self-destruct. Fawriel ran over to Jack. He was kneeling by Electrik.
“He’s still breathing. It’s amazing he could survive a blow to the skull like that.” Said Jack Flash.
They ran over to Phoenix Wing.
“Okay, we need to get her out of here as soon as possible. It looks like she has a broken back, and that was no soft punch to her stomach area.” Said Jack. They both jumped off the ship with Phoenix Wing and Electrik, knowing that they couldn’t attack Terminator just yet. They ran off towards Carrotus City.

The distractions were huddled under a rock that would keep them from being seen by terminator. One of the shots from the ship had hit Firefox. Emmi was doing her best to heal it. Terminator was circling overhead, wondering where they went and what happened to Omicron.

There's chapter 5! I'm sorry there wasn't any part for you, Flint, but I will try to include you in a later chapter.

Anyone (or nobody) can help me with ideas on how to write my chapters, the plot, or they can WRITE actual chapters(e-mail them to me, though, don't just post them on here. I want to make sure I like them first before they get posted.
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