I'd think Foo would fit in very well for this story.
Erm, but the second chapter was a little short, yeah. Try for more than 3 paragraphs.
Oh yeah, at one point, somebody should yell "mpbrassknucklez!" and a pair of gauntletz will fall out of the sky.
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