I agree; very dramatic start. I do suggest, though, that you try to do the text and borders digitally (even if you don't have fancy software, things like Powerpoint can do really nice text boxes and whatnot =P). My comic improved a lot when I stopped hand drawing the text boxes and borders.
Oh, and think you forgot his ears. Or maybe I just can't see them.
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