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If this is in the wrong section please move it. Been forever since I've made a thread on these forums.

I'm currently in the process of making a let's play of Jazz Jackrabbit 2 v 1.00g. It's something I haven't seend one before, so I thought this might be something fun to od. I'm making them informative. Showing off differences and offering bits of trivia for those who don't know much about the game.

Part 1 is done, however I want you opinion. Before I make part 2, is there anything I can improve on? Things I should add? Feel free to give em some feedback. However telling me my commentary sucks isn't feedback. I already know that

Part 1 is here: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=suFfDyO0klc (If you want to skip my short retrospective, the gameplay starts at 2:05) I try my hardest not to curse, but I can't stop everyone. So it MAY contain mild language. No f bombs though.

Please watch before posting and let me know what I can do to make it better. Thanks and I hope you enjoy.