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Dec 16, 2007, 10:07 AM
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Now for Something made by me for a change:


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It's called Frozen, and it shows that i've improved a LOT now compared to a few other things that you won't ever see.
Note that this is only the bottom of the level.

It needs some music. Any suggestions?

It looks alright, but be careful about using the layer 4 ground for eyecandy. It looks like its your primary form of decoration so far and it will confuse other people when they play your level, especially if its multiplayer. You should probably find some other means of eyecandy to put in your level, or at least don't put the ground tiles meant for eyecandy in layer 5 everywhere so other people can tell whats solid ground in your level.

Use layer 6/7 for something. There's just an empty blue sky in the background. If you can't think of anything to put there, maybe place a few trees. The blue haze looks good, since it looks like its water/ice and makes the bottom more interesting.

Just my opinion, though.
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