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Aug 24, 2006, 12:17 AM
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The Iron War

I'll just add some notes before I start.

This is not about Jazz Jackrabbit. This story is influenced by jazz, that's all (Along with several other computer games). I wanted to make a more adventrous version of my old childhood world (Rabbittown, rabbitearth...) and this story helped me make it.

I am no storyteller. I try to describe things best I can, but I fall short all over the place here. It plays out in my mind better than it goes on the paper, that's all I can say.

I currenty have a bit of writers block for this story. I think some feedback and suggestions would help immensely to continue this story.

I will post the prologue and the first two chapters right now (On seperate posts), then post some more on sunday.

If I edit the chapters already posted, I will add the changes in a edit.
and finally, the general info (and the first two chapters) for the universe can be found here

Last edited by Puffie40; Nov 30, 2006 at 09:52 PM.