Thank you very much. I take those pointers and go over the chapters. For the last few months, I have been going back constantly and adding detail.
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1. Don't use yourself as a character.
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I am not charactorizing myself. Puffie is my old stuffed rabbit (I know, it's kiddish  ) and that led to me using it as a webname.
I know the plot has a big hole in it. I'll think of somthing...
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